Little Miss Homo Sapien's Cave

Immortal

from dawn to dusk

from aft to bow

from bone to dust

from past to now

I will make rounds

just like the sun,

up and down:

The New Hourglass

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4 responses

  1. gracefulglider

    The new hourglass, intriguing how twisted the poem started, lovely message therein 🙂
    I love your rhyme scheme, alot!!! been working around that and hope to learn the hang of it.

    Love and Light

    10/01/2011 at 01:30

    • Thanks 🙂

      I like how rhyming puts color to my dull thoughts..

      Love and Light to you too.

      10/01/2011 at 01:59

  2. This is really good! I like the use of faith and science being intertwined so well to make a relevant point of irrelevance.

    11/01/2011 at 00:16

  3. I like how you saw through this piece. Thank you very much!

    11/01/2011 at 00:39

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